Jun 29, 2010

New idea

So, for those of you who don't know I tend to write poetry when inspired to or just when I feel like it. Here is a new idea that I have spinning around and is just getting started. Let me know what you guys think.

A container, a vessel.
Filled with traits and feelings.
Contents to be shared and understood.

Forever filtering, adjusting.
Trying to improve.

Down a stream,
This container floats.
Meeting others,
Sharing and receiving

Forever filtering, adjusting.
Trying to improve.

Others come and go.
Obstacles are plenty.
Waiting,
For one who will stay and accept.

Forever filtering, adjusting.
Trying to improve.



Thats all I have for now. Let me know.

1 comment:

  1. hmm... the vessel analogy is interesting.

    i like the repetition. bit different from what you usually have. :)

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